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Sunday, August 9, 2015

Strange Change

metamorphosis
Caterpillar---Butterfly
magnificent genes
this is a type3 metahaiku, the original reads "butterfly/magnificent wings", to bring sharper focus to the force of the first line , I added the hyphen elipsis to show untold time, capitalized to show majesty of adult form and wing became  genes to redirect attention to the cause of the first line. The change runs deeper than the look of the creature.

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